제 목 Homework (Carly) 상 태
작성자 Jeongjin 등록일 2020-01-02

Hello, because our last lesson was our first lesson that we had together, so I didn't really know what homework I should do. So I just decided to write what I did yesterday because, I think that quite many things happened, and plus can you tell me the exact topic or article to answer because as I said I don't really have an idea about what to write. Anyways, yesterday I did (had a) sleepover last night and really enjoyed it. The sleepover group were constructed consisted of 4 people including me. We played games, we walked, we swam and other stuff. We did a lots of things yesterday which was quite short time and I guess I wasn't only one who enjoyed it, I think everyone did. We slept at like 2 am because my friend didn't want to sleep but we just fell asleep without realizing that we are sleeping, you know what I mean by that. So yesterday was amazing night. I wish I can could have couple more sleepovers before my friend leaves because he leaves in 8 months after 8 months later. Oh, I will read article as well so don't really worry, I wish I read the right one today. Bye see you on the lesson!

Hi Jonathan! Sorry for the confusion. Your writing is great, only a couple mistakes. I would say in general, don't be afraid to use commas to avoid run-on sentences. I  am glad you enjoyed your sleep over!!

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